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  1. #1
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    Default Plinka & pxm - "Lady 2017."

    Plinka wrote the lyrics ang sang two tracks.
    Turned out as a really good blues, little jazzy.

    Pls, leave a comment and tell me how U liked our tune.

    Lady - shoes.jpg

    I follow a lady that walks by her own.
    Her log and her pics tell she wanna be alone.
    Her dresses and makeups are always updated.
    Admiring likers and comments, as waited.
    She seems like the strongest and happiest girl.
    It seems like whatever she does, it works!
    At least she inspires me in some ways,
    But also I feel like a looser some days.

    I follow this lady that travels alone.
    Wherever she's landed she seems to be home.
    The most imortant thing she carries in her bag
    is appearantly that lipstick that always is red.
    She looks like the strongest, and glamorous girl.
    Her status tells whatever she does, it works!
    At least she inspires me in some ways
    But also I feel so boring some days.
    Last edited by paxom; 01-24-2017 at 12:36 PM.

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    SashaS (01-24-2017)

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    Definitely jazzy.

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    paxom (01-24-2017)

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    Atlanta, GA, and Cashiers, NC
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    Default Another plateau of progress, Paxom!

    Quote Originally Posted by SashaS View Post
    Definitely jazzy.
    Your abstractions around the Blues progression are becoming more integrated, or fluent, Paxom. The addition of Plinka's vocal really adds to the integrity. And the lyrics like, "Sometimes I seem so boring some days" are integral with the sonic tone. Keep experimenting, Paxom. All your creations are paying off.

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